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Coffee Stains
Sat Nov 12, 2011, 06:37 PM
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RE: Coffee Stains
Snickers says:

The story, for me, seems to be about the normal, daily life of a regular, hard-working employee who let others know that he/she is happy to serve good service to others in simple, but great acts.
Overall, I think it's great enough to bring a smile to someone's day :3
Probably just keep practicing and you'll get better? XD
I'm not really much of a story writer anyway, can't criticize in my position and pin-point what you need to improve on (unlike horsey :c)... sooo, what do I know? :3

But, I really think it's a great start... can't wait to read more what you have to post..!

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Coffee Stains - AmsilDonnovan - Fri Nov 11, 2011, 11:32 PM
RE: Coffee Stains - AmsilDonnovan - Sat Nov 12, 2011, 06:26 AM
RE: Coffee Stains - AmsilDonnovan - Sat Nov 12, 2011, 10:13 AM
RE: Coffee Stains - Hollud - Sat Nov 12, 2011, 01:34 PM
RE: Coffee Stains - AmsilDonnovan - Sat Nov 12, 2011, 09:36 PM
RE: Coffee Stains - AmsilDonnovan - Sat Nov 12, 2011, 10:38 PM
RE: Coffee Stains - Hollud - Sun Nov 13, 2011, 04:08 PM
RE: Coffee Stains - _snickers_ - Sat Nov 12, 2011 06:37 PM
RE: Coffee Stains - AmsilDonnovan - Sun Nov 13, 2011, 09:57 PM
RE: Coffee Stains - Canis Enigmas - Mon Jan 09, 2012, 06:54 AM
RE: Coffee Stains - AmsilDonnovan - Mon Jan 09, 2012, 08:24 AM
RE: Coffee Stains - Canis Enigmas - Mon Jan 09, 2012, 05:14 PM
RE: Coffee Stains - AmsilDonnovan - Mon Jan 09, 2012, 07:17 PM
RE: Coffee Stains - ickda - Wed Apr 25, 2012, 03:08 PM
RE: Coffee Stains - AmsilDonnovan - Thu Jul 19, 2012, 04:54 AM

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