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Coffee Stains
Fri Nov 11, 2011, 11:32 PM
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Wink Coffee Stains
The small coffee shop was full to bursting with the snowy Denver wind blowing its hardest outside the warm interior. I added some cream and a generous spoonful of sugar to a steaming mug, then checked my list and brought it to table 7, where a tired-looking shiba inu anthro and her four pups squabbled.
"Here you are, ma'am," I said with a smile. She looked relieved.
"Thank you so much. I'll leave your tip right here, is that alright?" she asked.
"Yes, thank you." I replied. "Have a nice day!"
As soon as the bell on the door jangled to signify another satisfied customer had left, I glanced at the clock on the wall. It was 2:00 P.M., the end of my shift. Finally, I thought, and sighed in relief. I slipped off my apron, hung it on its peg in the kitchen, and stepped outside the door.

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that's all I've got so far! I'm new to AA as well, joined today, so please don't be too hard on me ^^;
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Coffee Stains - AmsilDonnovan - Fri Nov 11, 2011 11:32 PM
RE: Coffee Stains - AmsilDonnovan - Sat Nov 12, 2011, 06:26 AM
RE: Coffee Stains - AmsilDonnovan - Sat Nov 12, 2011, 10:13 AM
RE: Coffee Stains - Hollud - Sat Nov 12, 2011, 01:34 PM
RE: Coffee Stains - AmsilDonnovan - Sat Nov 12, 2011, 09:36 PM
RE: Coffee Stains - AmsilDonnovan - Sat Nov 12, 2011, 10:38 PM
RE: Coffee Stains - Hollud - Sun Nov 13, 2011, 04:08 PM
RE: Coffee Stains - _snickers_ - Sat Nov 12, 2011, 06:37 PM
RE: Coffee Stains - AmsilDonnovan - Sun Nov 13, 2011, 09:57 PM
RE: Coffee Stains - Canis Enigmas - Mon Jan 09, 2012, 06:54 AM
RE: Coffee Stains - AmsilDonnovan - Mon Jan 09, 2012, 08:24 AM
RE: Coffee Stains - Canis Enigmas - Mon Jan 09, 2012, 05:14 PM
RE: Coffee Stains - AmsilDonnovan - Mon Jan 09, 2012, 07:17 PM
RE: Coffee Stains - ickda - Wed Apr 25, 2012, 03:08 PM
RE: Coffee Stains - AmsilDonnovan - Thu Jul 19, 2012, 04:54 AM

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